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The Australian Zoo
Attention: Terri, Bindi and Rober Irwin
Steve Irwin Way
Beerwah
Queensland 4519
Australia

2 September, 2007


Dear Terri, Bindi and Robert,

I was so sorry to hear that Steve died. I thought he was brave because he played with the dangerous animals and he liked them. He was very young to die but you must live whit it you must be strong. I knew that he will die in the sea because there are dangerous animals in the sea they are protected with poison etc. I wish you success and remember be strong he was a brave man to see and I know you gonna miss him but you must forget it and go on whit your live.

All the best

Zakaria Askali 2H

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The Australian Zoo
Attention: Terri, Bindi and Rober Irwin
Steve Irwin Way
Beerwah
Queensland 4519
Australia

2 September, 2007


Dear Terri, Bindi and Robert,

I was so sorry to hear that Steve died. I thought he was brave because he was not afraid of dangerous animals and he liked them. He was very young to die but you must live with it you must be strong. I knew that he will die in the sea because there are dangerous animals in the sea they are protected with poison etc. I wish you success and remember be strong he was a brave man to see and I know you gonna miss him but you must forget it and go on whit your live.

All the best

Zakaria Askali 2H

Mohawk Chieftain zei

You are an insensitive asshole!